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Post by Crimson Skies Wed Mar 22, 2017 4:44 pm

More bandits appeared. This was when the movie switched from talking and romance to highly-stylized blood and violence.

Two, trained ronin versus a small army of bandits.

As a response to her brandishing her weapon, the magical barried around the room the shape of a bubble shrunk considerably.
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Post by Dogy9978 Wed Mar 22, 2017 5:25 pm

"Kia wouldn't have wanted to see this.." Liela looked around. "What is this about?!" Liela waved her weapon ready to do her spell.
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Post by Crimson Skies Wed Mar 22, 2017 5:31 pm

It was probably beyond obvious right now that that this was the movie's last legs and they wanted to end it with a bang, hence why they went all out with the violence and blood and everything most people were waiting for

After all was said and done, it started to rain and the last bandit, the leader of the bandits, entered the frame.

The bubble then started shrinking down even further. It was likely gonna trap Liela so that she couldn't escape while she was being moved to the execution room.
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Post by Dogy9978 Wed Mar 22, 2017 5:45 pm

"the leader" "I need room to do this..." She waved her scythe faster. It glowed more. She had killed many before today. She had enough to give to revive the agents. She also knew they wouldn't stop this execution unless she showed proof. "Vur sekui na Jen! Vur sekui na Jen!!!" She said over and over. She closed her eyes. After a few moments the man were right Infront of her in the small Bubble. Liela fell to her knees.
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Post by Crimson Skies Wed Mar 22, 2017 5:49 pm

The fight between the two of them and the bandit leader Savoth was likely the best part of the movie, as far as combat was involved.

Both parties fought fairly, not rellying on any tricks of any kind. Being older than Mirui and Nikki's age combined, Savoth knew he wouldn't win, but damn if he didn't put up a good fight.

There was valour in that.

The bubble slowly retracted back to its original size.
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Post by Dogy9978 Wed Mar 22, 2017 6:10 pm

Prima smiled at this. "Oh gosh..." Liela looked at the ground and then at the agents she revived. "You guys....O-okay?"
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Post by Crimson Skies Wed Mar 22, 2017 6:16 pm

When it came to the killing blow, his eyes were calm and prepared.

He did not fear death; his last dance with it was like a warrior should meet his end.

And he did.

The agents, weaponless and a bit confused, were not very happy to see her.

To be fair, it was less hatred and more deeply profound fear. They didn't even say anything.
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Post by Dogy9978 Wed Mar 22, 2017 6:25 pm

"hmmm...." "Good... Because I'm not going to be...Doing that...trick..For a w-while..."
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Post by Crimson Skies Wed Mar 22, 2017 6:32 pm

The two look over to the horizon. The storm had no intention of stopping. "And our next step?" Nikki asked.

The door crept open and the agents fled the room. The same that gave her her death sentence than entered.

"You're full of surprises, aren't you?"
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Post by Dogy9978 Wed Mar 22, 2017 6:39 pm

"what would it be?" "I told you...i wasn't lying..."
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Post by Crimson Skies Wed Mar 22, 2017 6:51 pm

A paper was shown, with the bandit's name crossed out. Several other names were hinted at, but most of them were hidden under the angle of the shot.

"The Westland Butcher."

The agent was still unimpressed. "Crimes are not that easily forgiven. They're back, and we are all thankful their family can be told it was merely an administrative error on our part when we told them that they had fallen, but the fact remains. You've commited several acts of heinous crimes."
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Post by Dogy9978 Wed Mar 22, 2017 6:57 pm

"that doesn't sound very nice" "how are you not the least but feeling emotions over what I did?! I Just brought someome back to life!!! "
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Post by Crimson Skies Wed Mar 22, 2017 7:01 pm

Fade to black. The name of the film was finally shown and the how the two of them battled the Butcher was shown over the credits as a stylized and bloody cartoon.

Certainly a nice touch to end things, but the film felt like the story didn't end; the film just stopped in what was essentially the middle.

"I don't need the approval of the commitee to know criminal scum when I see it."
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Post by Dogy9978 Wed Mar 22, 2017 7:08 pm

"that was a good movie. " "But I'm not!!! I came to save my friend!! She texted me saying that she had been found and being chased down!!! I don't see criminals doing that type of crap around here. "
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Post by Crimson Skies Wed Mar 22, 2017 7:14 pm

After the credits, the words 'Mirui and Nikki will return' appeared and audience responded by cheering.

"It really was," Maggie told her. "My expectations were low, but it really surprised me. I suppose the only thing that I didn't like was how it first needed a build up of some sort. All the interesting parts started happening after the first half."

"We don't live in a world where the ends justify the means."
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Post by Dogy9978 Wed Mar 22, 2017 7:16 pm

"I assume there will be another movie. And yes while agree the Beginning was boring, there always has to be a build up." "Well we should."
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Post by Crimson Skies Wed Mar 22, 2017 7:19 pm

"I suppose as an introductory movie to some followup, yeah, it's pretty good."

"I'll talk this through the commitee, see what they have to say on the matter."
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Post by Dogy9978 Thu Mar 23, 2017 1:00 pm

"Now what?" Prima said still thinking about the movie. "Thanks."
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Post by Crimson Skies Thu Mar 23, 2017 1:11 pm

"Wanna go out for something to eat?"

The person left and the doors closed. She was left alone once again.

Made one think just what were they doing with Katherine.
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Post by Dogy9978 Thu Mar 23, 2017 1:13 pm

"where to?" Liela laid down on the bed looking at the ceiling. "Please let her be ok"
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Post by Crimson Skies Thu Mar 23, 2017 1:18 pm

"I'unno. Anything you like?"

In the meantime, half of the commitee wanted to crack her open and see what made her tick, while the other half was completely against the idea, as they had no blurprints to put her back together.

The first half argued that putting her back together was not their intention, which understably upset the second half.
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Post by Dogy9978 Thu Mar 23, 2017 1:23 pm

"I don't remember what I like for food. It's been so long since I've had food...".Liela started singing. Her voice wasn't horrible but it wasn't amazing. It was decent. "What would it take for things to be quiet. Quiet like the snow. Are we meant to be empty-handed?"
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Post by Crimson Skies Thu Mar 23, 2017 4:38 pm

"Well, why not try a little bit of everything, then? I've of a place that does a dish like that."

The agent come back again. "The commitee decided against solitary confinement."
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Post by Dogy9978 Thu Mar 23, 2017 6:16 pm

"oh?" "So I'm free to go? Or....?"
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Post by Crimson Skies Thu Mar 23, 2017 6:22 pm

"Yep. I haven't been to that part of the city, so, no idea where it is exactly."

"We're relocating you to the android."
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