Flame the hedgehog

Name:Flame
Nicknames:dosent have one
[u]Age:15
[u]Species:hedgehog
[u]Gender:male
[u]Occupation:agent for g.u.n. and scientist

[u]Appearance:black fur with silver streakes down his arms and legs.Has silver eyes and a scar across his right eye. Wares a silver ring on his right wrist. wears black and silver shoes.Is well built and average height

[u]References:


Personality traits

Likes:
Learning
Combat
Exercise

[u]Dislikes:
All things evil and corrupt
Wen someone is stupid on perpus
If someone gets in the way of his goals


[u]Personality:Is mostly a loner not wanting many freands,he is prone to violence when angered witch is easy to do but he trys to control himself. Is willing to work with others only if it helps him or he deems them worthy of his time.



Combat traits

[u]Powers:super speed and intelligence, has slightly above average strangth and minor regeration

[u]Strengths:
Versatile fighting style
G.U.N. training
Very stealthy

Weaknesses:
Untrusting
Tends to be reckless
Regeneration and super speed  takes a lot of energy if used often


Social information

Positive relations
No one but his comrades at G.U.N


Negative relations
His superiors
Most of the world

[b][size=16]History:At the young age of 3 Flame's parents were murdered by criminals in cood blood because they refused to give flame to them or support them in any way. Flame swore revenge and did so 6 years later after he trained himself extensively. The criminalswere later found to be on the G.U.N number one wanted list so they found Flame and convinced him to join them so that they can monitor him and find out how he was able to single handedly take out some of the most dangerous know criminals.Flame as ben training and going on missions for G.U.N ever sence[/u][/u][/u][/u][/u][/u][/u][/u][/u][/u]

Be prepared for some criticism here. This comes from personal experience for me, because I have had some pretty bad OCs in the past.

First off:
-your character is extremely cliché. It needs to have a little... Pizzazz, to ensure it stands out amongst the crowd here.
-why would GUN randomly take a bystander into their military organisation?
-why did these criminals murder his parents?
-why was flame named flame?
- how did he train himself?
-also, your powers are incredibly overpowered. Having super speed, super strength, intelligence and regeneration, with virtually no consequences? That sounds op to me.

Yo Red Blur.
While I appreciate your attempt to make our members improve, I think you should try sounding more... subtle. Perhaps ask if they even WANT criticism in the first place? And remember how I told you that we know when someone is breaking the rules? It applies here too - if you think someone is OP, tell us first, aye? c:


And Shadow Flame:
While Red Blur was a bit harsh up there, he did have some fair points. With OPness...? Well, minor strength and regeneration were fine, speed ans intelligence... only if they do not surpass Sonic and Tails/Eggman in terms. I suppose you're sensible and know how to NOT overdo it.