Knux's Character Critique Area

Its been a while since I’ve done character critiques and figure I’d start doing them again.

A bit about me, been roleplaying and creating characters well over 10+ years and during my college years, helped run a critique blog where I was one of the critiquing admins.  If there’s one thing I can say, I make sure to read over characters and find what jumps out at me.  I can also say with my experience, I’ve seen a lot of characters over the years and I myself have done some “do’s and don’t’s” when it comes to characters.  I’m here to teach people not to make mistakes like I and many others have done over the years and to help improve characters on the forums..

I am warning anyone that submits their characters to me, I’m a harsh critic.  If some is an issue, I’m going to point it out and make it clear why its any issue.  I don’t resort to name calling or such though, just giving the straight truth.  As with any critique, you don’t need to listen to my critique but assuming if you’re submitting them here that you would like someone’s opinion on them.

So rules are very simple!  Reply in this thread with the character you want me to critique and a link to their bio on the forums.  When I have the time to, I will go into their bio thread and do my critique.  I will update this thread as I get them done.  I will note that I’m only doing this during my free time, I’m a very busy person outside of the internet so unlike some of you folks that have all the time in the world to kill, I don’t sad to say.

Da List
1. True Lycalo: https://sonicrpnation.forumotion.com/t1735-tharros-polemistis (Tharros)
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Hmm, I'm always down for a character critique, and an honest one at that. If it's not too much of a bother, could you give a review for Tharros? That'd be most awesome.

https://sonicrpnation.forumotion.com/t1735-tharros-polemistis

Blazing's critique has been done.  Lycalo is up next and will work on it as I have the free time available.

I am new to the sonic fandom, so forums like this one are lifesavers! I would be really grateful if you could take a look at Camelo , he's my first sonic rpc and getting somebody elses opinion would help a lot, so don't hold back on the critique. 

Hello! I have my character, and I hope someone can improve it!

Wow that's been a while since that guy posted. Want to post the link to your character here and I'll have a look at it?