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Post by imbadwithnames on Sun Jan 07, 2018 4:52 am

And again, I'm concerned that that doesn't fit into the context of the RP. It's already been stated what Machina is and the tactics they use; involving "spiritual force[s] embodied by the malevolent intelligent entities comprised of psychic energy" seems to go against their motif. Even in a secondary antagonist's role it just seems to shift the focus from the core RP, adding elements that deviate from the main plot and established theme/genre. I honestly think that would fit more with another RP, not one of this nature.


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Post by Gamma V on Sun Jan 07, 2018 6:39 am

I was thinking the corrupting influence David and Agatha were here to protect XM from WAS Machina.  So far, we have 3 full-fledged factions involving themselves with XM.

DVNz was against him at first due to believing he was a hostile Metal.  Now, they appear to be ready to side with him against Machina.

Machina originally created XM and serves as the main antagonistic faction here.

GUN is currently in the same position that DVNz was initially, believing XM to be hostile and coming after him because of it.  GUN's alignment can go either way.  They're a government organization, and since Machina takes some cues from the Illuminati, there could be a secret alliance between the two factions.  The individual GUN officers could pick a side based on that.  If GUN has ties to Machina, and they learn of this, they could decide to either stay with GUN or ally with DVNz and Amber to help XM, bringing their military experience with them.  Steel, my GUN character, is an android himself, and he has a "heart" like XM.  He could decide to side with him upon getting to know him.  What the other GUN operatives do is up to MikeMurdock since they're his characters.

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Post by imbadwithnames on Sun Jan 07, 2018 7:26 am

To put this as tactfully as I can: please do not presume the authority to objectively dictate what is a good plot and what is not. The principle reason why I'm "complaining" is because you're trying to change an ongoing RP to fit your sole preferences instead of what Gamma has already established as the core premise, and these changes can make things inconvenient for the current participants. I am in no way denouncing your idea in itself nor your aptitude as a content creator, I just feel these ideas would be better in a separate RP.

With that said, if Jared's dropping out, then it's just going to be Gamma, Mike, then me as the post order. After my next post I guess we'll start with that.
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Post by Gamma V on Sun Jan 07, 2018 5:58 pm

Considering how bad Jared's involvement seems to have derailed the RP and its plot in its current form, I'm considering starting over.  If I do so, I'll have to find a new thing to fascinate XM besides a synchronized Christmas light display since Christmas is over.  Alternatively, I could start with Steel being deployed to hunt him down.

Alternatively, we could save this if Jared is willing to delete his posts and everyone else is willing to edit around it.  I really should've just told him that his characters DIDN'T belong from the start.

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Post by imbadwithnames on Sun Jan 07, 2018 7:37 pm

We could just restart to before he joined, when Volt was escorting Amber and XM out of the city prior to spotting Agatha and David. It might be awkward jump, but I'll try to come up with a way to bring Mike back in so we can get back on track.
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