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Post by SmookiSmooku on Tue Jul 04, 2017 6:29 pm

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Tue Jul 04, 2017 9:56 pm

A hedgehog hitched a ride on top of a speeding jeep, which had backup GUN Soldier's driving. He wasn't apart of GUN, he just was on without permission. As the speeding jeep finally made it to the attack site, they got out and started firing, but they didn't stand a chance against them. The fell to the ground 30 seconds after. However, the hedgehog was somewhere else, hiding in a building. "This is nuts! How did they so quickly took this city?!" He looked outside the window, but ducked to dodge a bullet. "Jeez, where are the others when you need 'em." He questioned.

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Wed Jul 05, 2017 12:51 am

(K, your turn)

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Wed Jul 05, 2017 9:33 pm

He ran through the building, dodging laser fire on the way. As he made it down, he spotted two soldiers, not part of GUN. He struck them down with a punch so great. He soon ran to the battlefield, making cover to a destroyed car. "Ok, where is the leader, or something. Maybe if I take him down... it might work?" He looked over the car, only to see more soldiers heading his way. He got out of his cover as he fought back.

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Thu Jul 13, 2017 1:32 am

(You're controlling your entire army of soliders? I mean I know not to auto hit but I didn't know you were controlling the entire army. By the way it's your turn, please type it in the roleplay part, that way we can get things moving faster.)

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Tue Aug 01, 2017 1:52 pm

(Okay, cool. Your turn.)

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by Electrisa on Tue Aug 01, 2017 2:10 pm

Hey, you know what else is against the rules?


This RP.



"3. The site rating is PG-13. No 'ifs' 'ands' or 'buts'. No 'Well I'm 13 and I watch 18+ movies'. No 'Well lots of 13 year olds are into violent media these days'. PG-13 in the most traditional sense of the word. All conversations AND roleplays in any public space of this forum must stick to this rating.
This means to avoid items of a more sexual nature, detailed violence or other more sensitive subjects. It also means we'd rather you keep swearing to a minimum - it's not outright banned, but try to avoid using it unless you feel it absoloutely neccesary to the emphasis of your statements. We'll warn you if we feel you're being excessive... though ideally you should be able to tell for yourself if you are."

I feel like Mobian recreation of WWII definitely falls under "more sensitive subject". We'll have to delete this RP unless you somehow tame it down to acceptable levels of PG 13 violence.

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by Spekkal on Tue Aug 01, 2017 10:43 pm

other than the plot similarities to the Holocaust
This is literally the issue that breaks the PG-13 rule, not the war violence itself. From what I've read, that is fine. I know you're trying to run a plot, but involving concentration camps and mimicking the holocaust is not okay here.


If you can just simply change this, then you can continue with no issues (as of current). But if it stays, it will be deleted accordingly.

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Thu Aug 31, 2017 7:30 am

(So... are you gonna respond or...)

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