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The Grey Nightmare

Post by Jaredthefox92 on Tue Jul 04, 2017 4:27 pm

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The New Order has sent it's elite political parties forces, the Grey Guard to Mobius prime. They have taken control of Order forces stationed in Eurish and now are imposing  martial law that is rounding up suspects against the Order, and any hedgehog and echinda they can find and are shipping them off the concentration camps. The Grey Party is systematically plotting a massive ethnic cleansing in Eurish and if left un-opposed it may lead to war atrocities and mass genocide. They must be stopped at all costs.

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"It was raining that one Summer's afternoon in northern Spagonia. Occupying Order forces sent directly from Moebius were patrolling through the streets, yet other this the day was rather normal if not dreary.The Order forces have been sent in by the newly formed 'Greater Spagonian' occupational government formed two months ago when their forces swept into the capital and a puppet state governor simply known as Amanda Bradanska was placed in charge as a figurehead. GUN forces fought valiantly to defend the city. However, the Order's Blitzkrieg tactics were devastatingly effective and their psychic special forces were able to break through GUN's lines and bring havoc to their forces."

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Tue Jul 04, 2017 6:29 pm

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by Jaredthefox92 on Tue Jul 04, 2017 8:02 pm

(Sure you can! Smile )

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Tue Jul 04, 2017 9:56 pm

A hedgehog hitched a ride on top of a speeding jeep, which had backup GUN Soldier's driving. He wasn't apart of GUN, he just was on without permission. As the speeding jeep finally made it to the attack site, they got out and started firing, but they didn't stand a chance against them. The fell to the ground 30 seconds after. However, the hedgehog was somewhere else, hiding in a building. "This is nuts! How did they so quickly took this city?!" He looked outside the window, but ducked to dodge a bullet. "Jeez, where are the others when you need 'em." He questioned.

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by Jaredthefox92 on Tue Jul 04, 2017 11:53 pm

(They're firing cold plasma and laser based weaponry. They're pretty high tech.)

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Wed Jul 05, 2017 12:51 am

(K, your turn)

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by Jaredthefox92 on Wed Jul 05, 2017 8:34 pm

GUN was currently being engaged by combined New Order, and Greator Spagonian forces. A hail of cold plasma and laser rifle fire battered and struck the the downed jeep all the while trying to surpass the GUN forces taking refuge. The forces of Moebius were also taking aim so their fire would be very precise as they aimed down the sights of their weaponry.

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Wed Jul 05, 2017 9:33 pm

He ran through the building, dodging laser fire on the way. As he made it down, he spotted two soldiers, not part of GUN. He struck them down with a punch so great. He soon ran to the battlefield, making cover to a destroyed car. "Ok, where is the leader, or something. Maybe if I take him down... it might work?" He looked over the car, only to see more soldiers heading his way. He got out of his cover as he fought back.

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by Jaredthefox92 on Wed Jul 12, 2017 5:02 am

(Please don't auto-hit, it's against the rules. )

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Thu Jul 13, 2017 1:32 am

(You're controlling your entire army of soliders? I mean I know not to auto hit but I didn't know you were controlling the entire army. By the way it's your turn, please type it in the roleplay part, that way we can get things moving faster.)

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by Jaredthefox92 on Tue Aug 01, 2017 12:43 am

(This isn't an 'in and out' roleplay, this is an entire battle and it's supposed to get more and more complex. Also, whether I'm controlling forces or not, you shouldn't try to auto-hit.)

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Tue Aug 01, 2017 1:52 pm

(Okay, cool. Your turn.)

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by Electrisa on Tue Aug 01, 2017 2:10 pm

Hey, you know what else is against the rules?


This RP.



"3. The site rating is PG-13. No 'ifs' 'ands' or 'buts'. No 'Well I'm 13 and I watch 18+ movies'. No 'Well lots of 13 year olds are into violent media these days'. PG-13 in the most traditional sense of the word. All conversations AND roleplays in any public space of this forum must stick to this rating.
This means to avoid items of a more sexual nature, detailed violence or other more sensitive subjects. It also means we'd rather you keep swearing to a minimum - it's not outright banned, but try to avoid using it unless you feel it absoloutely neccesary to the emphasis of your statements. We'll warn you if we feel you're being excessive... though ideally you should be able to tell for yourself if you are."

I feel like Mobian recreation of WWII definitely falls under "more sensitive subject". We'll have to delete this RP unless you somehow tame it down to acceptable levels of PG 13 violence.

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by Jaredthefox92 on Tue Aug 01, 2017 5:10 pm

Electrisa wrote:Hey, you know what else is against the rules?


This RP.



"3. The site rating is PG-13. No 'ifs' 'ands' or 'buts'. No 'Well I'm 13 and I watch 18+ movies'. No 'Well lots of 13 year olds are into violent media these days'. PG-13 in the most traditional sense of the word. All conversations AND roleplays in any public space of this forum must stick to this rating.
This means to avoid items of a more sexual nature, detailed violence or other more sensitive subjects. It also means we'd rather you keep swearing to a minimum - it's not outright banned, but try to avoid using it unless you feel it absoloutely neccesary to the emphasis of your statements. We'll warn you if we feel you're being excessive... though ideally you should be able to tell for yourself if you are."

I feel like Mobian recreation of WWII definitely falls under "more sensitive subject". We'll have to delete this RP unless you somehow tame it down to acceptable levels of PG 13 violence.


The 'theme' and situation is similar, but as far as the maturity level it's actually around the comics. Like the Dark Egg Legion, the Order is going to be portrayed sort of the same. Bear in mind that Eggman has captured entire cities and forced roboticaztion on the populace, as well as the Egg Grape incident. As for how it wouuld play out I would say other than the plot similarities to the Holocaust, the actual violence would be Y-7. The weapons and soldiers would act like the Egg Army or the Dark Egg Legion do with their weaponry, (or in Star Wars Clone Wars/Star Wars Rebels). 

Yes, the Order are arresting civilians, but they're doing it in a manner that Eggman has clearly done to Overlanders, Echindas, Freedom Fighters, ect have been in the comics and in Sonic Underground. Other than a few beatings that are normal for cartoon kid violence, it's nothing that is over Y-7.

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by Spekkal on Tue Aug 01, 2017 10:43 pm

other than the plot similarities to the Holocaust
This is literally the issue that breaks the PG-13 rule, not the war violence itself. From what I've read, that is fine. I know you're trying to run a plot, but involving concentration camps and mimicking the holocaust is not okay here.


If you can just simply change this, then you can continue with no issues (as of current). But if it stays, it will be deleted accordingly.

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by Jaredthefox92 on Tue Aug 01, 2017 11:36 pm

Spekkal wrote:
other than the plot similarities to the Holocaust
This is literally the issue that breaks the PG-13 rule, not the war violence itself. From what I've read, that is fine. I know you're trying to run a plot, but involving concentration camps and mimicking the holocaust is not okay here.


If you can just simply change this, then you can continue with no issues (as of current). But if it stays, it will be deleted accordingly.

Fine, for the roleplay I'll leave out the camps. However, in my main lore this is a thing, (and there is also reason for it as well. You can blame elements such as the Dark Egg Legion, Enerjak,Fintivious, hedgehogs in the fandom, Scourge, heck even Sonichu has influence as to why the Order basically wants to eliminate certain species. However, I wasn't going to feature what goes on in these camps here regardless. Even Grief himself doesn't realize all the atrocities the greys do because everything is covered up from even the rest of the Bradanska family.

To put it simple, there are some very nasty characters that are worse than my main villains, but they don't reveal themselves as such. I wasn't intending on actually showing the really horrifying stuff anyways, but the Order are still very dark characters anyways. )

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Re: The Grey Nightmare

Post by SmookiSmooku on Thu Aug 31, 2017 7:30 am

(So... are you gonna respond or...)

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