Liela when she was a kid

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Liela when she was a kid

Post by Dogy9978 on Sat May 21, 2016 2:40 am

I've you've been paying attention to Liela Devionus's bio than you might have already seen this but since this is the artwork section ima post it here too.


 This is when she was living all by herself as a kid. Still wearing that clothes that her parents had given her.

"I'm just a kid...
It was just a little mistake...
I'm just a little mistake"

Here is some of the other art I've done

 LOL Rouge the bat isn't my fav sonic character but someone asked me to draw har and I was like sure.

This is Tofa. She is a pika(It's a real animal and it's not a pikachu -_-) That's really it. I'm thinking of introducing her and adding a bio but I don't have that much ideas for her. The only one I do have is that she is a fire dancer.




Feel free on telling me how I should improve on my art. Feedback would be good. Smile
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Post by Shrike Marine on Sat May 21, 2016 10:42 am

I actually think this is pretty good. I am not sure where you can improve, looks already really good.
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Re: Liela when she was a kid

Post by Dogy9978 on Sat May 21, 2016 10:49 am

Man really??? Thanks.

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Re: Liela when she was a kid

Post by Dione on Sat May 21, 2016 12:02 pm

Lemme tell ya, I really like your style ^^ Though, I think that there could be a bit more shading, it'd give your drawings and characters a bit more dimension and make them seem a tad more dynamic, if you get what I mean c: (THOUGH I'm not a professional artist and I'm just writing down what I think would look good ^-^; )
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Post by Dregan on Mon May 23, 2016 8:50 pm

You do really have a neat li'l style. It feels very... soft? Gives everything this almost airy vibe to it. Also, really like the use of the highlight shade on the Rouge piece, though 'flat with highlight' is generally a style I'm kinda drawn towards.
I think really the main thing for you to try and look into moving forward is giving your pieces just that little bit more energy/looseness. Some of the stuff you're posting at the moment can feel quite stiff.
Still, excellent work! Hope to see more from you!

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