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Post by SparkleSwirl on Tue Feb 09, 2016 6:12 pm

Hey there!
This seems like it could be fun for me~

So pop in a link to your bio or an image of your character and I'll pop in a few suggested changes~

I'm pretty gentle with things, but the whole point of this is for me to suggest changes/additions SO there will be a few things in haha~

I may sketch something or like
Scribble on the drawing you give me if it's for their design


And if you give me one with a REALLY long bio I'll probably only skim it

BUT I'll try to get to all/most of them~
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Re: Lemme Make suggestions for your character!

Post by Guest on Tue Feb 09, 2016 7:34 pm

These are links to my Bios, I know you already did one of my OC's but if you could I'd like you to do the others or at least one more if you don't want to do them all

http://sonicrpnation.forumotion.com/t3790-trance-the-hedgecat

http://sonicrpnation.forumotion.com/t3789-emily-the-skox

http://sonicrpnation.forumotion.com/t3788-kyle-chameleon-bio

Again you don't have to do any of them unless you want to.

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Post by SparkleSwirl on Tue Feb 09, 2016 8:00 pm

Alrightie ! So on the bio line of things

I'm a bit lost on how Trance and Emily are related, unless they're adoptive? 
Maybe make one a Hedgefox and one a Skunkfox or one a Hedgefox and one a Hedgeskunk? That way it at least makes sense for one parent to be the same
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And Kyle just seems a bit... Too sad to work with, for an RP setting at least. It'd be a huge downer for everyone involved for him not to like anything! Maybe have some likes he doesn't realize he has yet, at least, so he can encounter them and cheer up a bit
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Post by Guest on Tue Feb 09, 2016 8:59 pm

Kyle does have things he likes but hasn't realized yet, so your right about him.  As for Emily and Trance, yes they are sisters, but they're both adopted, only their parents aren't really...parents...it's kinda depressing if you look at it that way, but I think that's what makes Emily and Trance who they are if you know what I mean.

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Post by CyanFox on Tue Feb 09, 2016 9:23 pm

Ah sure why not. But only if you have time for it!

also hello I am Cyan nice to meet you xD
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Post by MrFamous on Wed Feb 10, 2016 12:17 am

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Re: Lemme Make suggestions for your character!

Post by SparkleSwirl on Wed Feb 10, 2016 1:53 am

Cries the page refreshed and I had to type this over, so it may be a bit shortened for the sake of

I had to type it over

@CYanfoxboy  first
The chaos magic/energy attacks seem pretty cool, but kind of like they might get in the way in RPs and such?
Either by sake of
Being pretty OP or causing the character harm due to taking so much energy~
I do like the bracelet Idea though!
(Though speaking for appearance design, it makes more sense to have it below the jacket's sleeve~)
So making them toned down/weaker versions of the chaos attacks is a good way to go, or limiting it to one or two of them

And the genetic mutation aspect is interesting, but not really explained? It was a little confusing for me

If I were to change it, I'd probably have him have been exposed to a high level of chaos energy either in the womb or as a newborn/very small baby  + his body kind of absorbed it? I guess
How one express thought, darn my head right now. 
Btw, the colors look really nice together! 


@ MrFamous
This is a really amusing character tbh , I like the concept a lot haha

I think you're missing out on some opportunities for him to doll himself up more though
CHECK these horn rings man
Also totally not necessary if the point is for him to be plain looking as a base, but here are some chameleons with 
Pseudo - Hair Tentacle bits
Hair (This looked pretty weird though...)

And I love the armor idea from the meteor, especially if you add in something about him touching the ding dang thing that JUST fell from the sky (Or some funny tidbit along those lines) as reasoning for HOW the meteor granted him the power~

BUT I'm not big on the rapier and extra strength in the other hand?
Not in a "It couldn't be cool" sort of way, by any means! Just that, it doesn't seem related to the meteor
I think doing something more like "Oh, I have this newfound armor power. If I'm going to use it for fighting, maybe I should pick up an actual weapon too? I took fencing lessons as a kid, how about a rapier (And then I can get a fancy one and it'll be a cool accessory afro)  " 

Or just using his agility + dancing abilities to fight would be a great concept to use, I think~ Either way really!~
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Re: Lemme Make suggestions for your character!

Post by Dione on Tue Mar 08, 2016 1:29 pm

Yes please!
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Re: Lemme Make suggestions for your character!

Post by LuckyEights on Fri Mar 11, 2016 2:56 am

So I made a OC not too long ago and I saw this thread here and thought "hey this sounds useful!" Mind giving him a look over? I get self-conscious about my characters and I need validation to whether or not I did okay. :p

http://sonicrpnation.forumotion.com/t3840-necro-the-crow#177258
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Re: Lemme Make suggestions for your character!

Post by PyroGX on Thu Sep 15, 2016 9:07 pm

http://sonicrpnation.forumotion.com/t4147-arctururs-pyro-telesis#184784

This here is Arctururs "Pyro" Telesis, first character I've added to the character bios section of this forum, and my main character among the few I'm going to add. Along with this one is intended to be three extra characters that come with him - Ace, Bonnie, and Metal Pyro - and an original character not from Tristitia that I have not made yet, capping my character count at five with a potential of getting seven characters all together, eventually. 
Just saying, I stopped Sonic RPing a while ago and only recently have I decided to pop back in after my own original universe stuff has been slowing down, so I just want to make sure Pyro's re-entry to the Mobian atmosphere is a safe one. .3.

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