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Post by Dregan on Sat Dec 05, 2015 7:27 pm

It was an unpleasant day in Broken Gorge. Rain cover the night before had soaked it's way into the ground, only for the heat of the morning to call it all back up in the form of thick mist. A humid heat now hung through the town, shrouding it's inhabitants with an uncomfortable near-blindness. In a place where crime was so open, one would think the chaos would be out in full-force to take advantage of the concealing grey, but even the more hardened criminals here knew, this wasn't weather to be out in. And yet, on the very edge of town... two individuals were just arriving.

One would perhaps be a familiar face to this town. A bizarre being of indefinable species, furless flesh contrasting a beak-like snout, he was not one to be mistaken for another. Last time he was here he was dressed to work, adorned in a labcoat and glove which concealed his entire right arm.
Today instead, there was no such coat, no such glove, not even a shirt. That right arm was entirely exposed, large and grotesque against the rest of his body, covered in green scales that slowly mottled away as they passed beyond the reach of his shoulder. That wasn't the only thing different... Last time his eyes seemed... Well, nothing of note? A standard blue maybe? Nothing to've comitted to memory. Today though... they were a striking red.
Last time, he was dressed for work. This time, he was dressed for business...

Accompanying him was a rat, scarred and clad in thick leather. One of her legs was fully exposed it seemed, wooden by it's appearance. In one hand she had a cane to assist her walk, it's patterned thudding against the ground announcing her arrival.
Whilst the one she accompanied had a face full of bare suppressed aggression, this one... This one showed nothing.

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Post by Spekkal on Sat Dec 05, 2015 9:15 pm

Now this is usually where I explain the environment and the characters at hand, but losing several paragraphs of explanation and character detail can really demotivate you. So I'll pass you the basics instead and you can work your way from there. First post from me. Going good.

One of these details was that there was a group of three, not far from the newcomers and certainly within earshot. They were, however, obscured by the thick fog that had wormed its way into the air to linger, but a squint would probably allow you to make out three blurry darkened shapes amidst the mist.

The first was that of a gorgon. Green skin, and human-like features... bar her lower half which consisted of a snake's body, and tendril like hair that moved with a breeze that didn't exist. She was quite regal and intimidating, but the black leather jacket she wore, and that was all she wore, just made the snake woman look silly. It really didn't suit her. "-up, just shut it. I didn't call you out here for this bullshit, V."

The second was a female porcupine. She had a thick accent, that was almost as thick as her. He body was wide and buff, and she had several scars across her body that were notable even despite the fur. Plus, that black eye-patch looked like a recent addition, if going by the three jagged and crusted red indents across the right eye. "Whaa, cuz w'know y'jus' doin' this cuz y'scaaared of wee lil'Thuggie?"

The final one was a black-feathered griffon, with baby blue eyes. He wasn't as bulked as the woman beside him, but he was still tall and muscular and looked to have some serious experience on him. Leather armour, worn from battle, included. However, what didn't fit here was that condescending look in his eye, and that smug grin that was just plain ugly, "V' knows what's up. You're just a coward, Eyes. You just want a new group to hang out with."

"N-nuh... no, that's not... that's not...!" she clenched her fist and raised herself up, butting her forehead with the avian hybrid, "Shut the fuck up, pigeon, or I'll turn your bony ass into stone!" Her eyes glimmered with restrained malice, and she didn't exactly continue with that threat, "It's not like anyone would miss you! So shut your filthy yap, Roadkill, Or I'll-! ...I-I don't need anyone, or that stupid brain-dead oaf!"
"Yeah okay."

Needless to say, they thought they were alone on the outskirts of town here. Though from the company about to arrive, it was a really stupid play on their part.

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Post by Dregan on Mon Dec 07, 2015 1:31 am

There was a brief pause for consideration from the two newcomers to town. They hadn't quite anticipated others so close. Admittedly, the trio did seem... oblivious. It probably wouldn't be too hard to sneak past them. Still... a slight misstep and they'd be noticed. Besides which, they were here for information, and that wasn't to be garnered from avoiding people. If they were going to avoid everyone... well, there was no point being here.
The next thing to consider was their approach. There was of course violence. An ambush on the unsuspecting trio would perhaps better ensure their own safety - making themselves seem dangerous might rather encourage the three to talk. At the same time, that might cause quite the commotion, and they didn't want all that attention.
...Not yet anyway.

With a click, the furless figure lit up a cigarette, smirking slightly. The rat at his side meanwhile simply... dispersed. Her body seemed to become almost one with the mist for a second, before she was gone altogether. Now the man stood alone as he spoke up to the assembled three.

"An unusual night for a walk, don't you think?" he calmly announced his presence, "Then again, you strike me as an unusual group. Lotsa threats and big-talk flying around there. Seems like you guys need to calm down." Stepping towards the group, he pulled out his pack of cigarettes, offering one towards the gorgon.
"Any of you smoke? Might help to ease the nerves."

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Post by Spekkal on Sat Dec 19, 2015 4:20 pm

See, the reason this trio was out here was to avoid company, because it was out of the way and the fog would mask the. So, with that in mind, they certainly weren't expecting company to appear out of nowhere. How long were they listening? Well, regardless of that, the three jumped. Two of the three emitting swears in the process, and the remaining one raising their fists in order to beat face.

"The fuck are you?" the gorgon exclaimed, looking the man up and down with a hesitant gaze, instantly casting her suspicion on this newcomer. Of course, the offer for a cigarette caused this to instantly vanish, and she scrambled forward to take one for herself, "Fuckin' right, give me that."

Meanwhile, the other two, the griffon and the buff porcupine, glanced at each other. Their faces scrunched up, and the black-feathered hybrid shot a harsh glare towards this weasley man. None of the three were expecting company, and if company was to show up, it would at least have been someone vaguely familiar. But this dude? Nope, no recollection. I mean, you'd think you'd remember too, with a face and arm like that.
"S'uh, who's be you then?" the spiked mobian asked, rubbing her hands together with a blatant scowl, before twisting that action into cracking her knuckles in an intimidating manner, "An' how long's you's been peepin', ay?"

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Post by Dregan on Wed Dec 23, 2015 3:43 pm

The figure simply let the 'what' question brush over him. After all, in truth it was one he couldn't really answer... though the gorgon seemed to've already moved on from that. Flicking one cigarette to her, he placed another in his mouth, lighting it with a click of the fingers.
Ah now 'who' was he? That was a much better question.

"Me?" he grinned, smoke exhaling through his teeth, "I'm a doctor. Simply visiting to reacquaint myself with an old... hm. Let's not say friend, definitely far from that." Flicking a little ash away, he paused to consider the latter question... before fixing the porcupine with a gaze of... almost indifference?
"I would not call it peeping, that would give me an implicit interest in what you're doing. I simply turned up to town, and have approached the first people I heard talking loudly next to the entrance. It is not the most out-of-the-way location if you were intending a private get-together," he shrugged, "Either way, that's besides the point. If I was peeping, I wouldn't exactly want to make myself known. I just require some assistance and I shall be on my way."

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Post by Spekkal on Tue Jan 05, 2016 3:23 pm

The snake-esque woman squinted as the odd man ignited the cigarette with a simple click of his fingers. She glanced back at her own. An ugly frown crossed her face, and the woman rather rudely used his flame as a means to light her own. Not even a thankyou, and she shuffled off to the side to puff smoke into the thick and foggy air.

"Yo," the large spiked woman lowered her voice for the griffon's feathered ears, but even that could be heard if the good doctor were sharp enough. "Says this here freak's a doctor. Y'think they's were called f'some biz? I dunno, w'can't make 'um leave if they's wanted," she said, casting an uneasy eye his way.

Meanwhile, their assumed partner-in-crime simply slipped his talons into his pockets and rolled his eyes, "Actually you know what? Whatever. All I hear is bullshit complex words trying to confuse me, right? We're not gonna stop you. Just piss off, I don't want some nerd freak doctor thing trying to get all goody-goody in my books and trying to make me do things." Good. Great. How mature.

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Post by Dregan on Tue Jan 05, 2016 7:18 pm

With yet another click, the stranger lit the end of his index, using it to light the cigarette of the snake-like woman, before wafting it out. The smoke wafted briefly from his hand, before dispering into the surrounding mist.
He couldn't help but smirk to himself a little as the others mumbled among themselves. He'd be lying if he said he didn't take a little pleasure in disrupting their little get-together. Still... right now really wasn't the time for him to be enjoying himself - there was business to tend to.

"I can assure you I haven't used a complex word to address you at all, however, you are forgiven for your lack of full understanding, I assume it's been a long night." Was... was that an insult? Either way, he didn't exactly lend them much time to think it over.
"And I assure, I've no idea what being 'goody-goody' would be in your books, though I have no intention to make you truly do anything," he took a deep puff on his cigarette before continuing, "I further assure you I will piss off, after all, I'm here with a purpose of my own."
Taking the cigarette a second, he extinguished it against his own chest, before discarding it to one side. Smoke rose from the point, but the action seemed to've left no significant mark, bar a slight circle of ash at it's meeting point.

"I have business with Noose."

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Post by Spekkal on Mon Feb 08, 2016 2:43 pm

Two of the three went silent. Bar the porcupine, who howled with a cackling laughter, jabbing the gryphon with her elbow into his side, "Aha! Lil' runt's here t'see the boss! Prob'ly gonna tear 'em in two, she is! She will!" And, of course, in response the hybrid simply... gripped the bridge of his beak in a sigh.
"Motherf-... urgh. Okay. Sure. Whatever. I'm sorry, get off my back," if that was an actual apology to the doctor, or if it was just so he wouldn't rat them out, well, that didn't matter, because an apology wasn't asked for anyway, "You want her? Just like... keep walking into the goddamned town. She's in her office. Biggest building. Top floor. Better hope your ass isn't late or you'll be fucking dead. And that ain't my problem."

Finishing the cigarette far too quickly than what should be recommended, the gorgon lady dropped the butt onto the floor, using her tail to grind it into the ground. She blew the smoke directly into the air and stretched. "God I needed that." Good. Informative. Great.

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Post by Dregan on Wed Feb 24, 2016 3:04 pm

"Oh believe me, I'm late, very late," the figure maintained a calm, almost disturbingly pleasant smile, "Many, many years too later. But don't you worry. This is more a... 'surprise visit' rather than anything else. Don't worry, I'll make sure your identities go unmentioned in our little... meeting. Thank you very much for your assistance." He strode forward a short way, bypassing the group... before pausing and taking a few steps back.
"Oh, and for your troubles..." he threw the pack of cigarettes to the snake-like individual, before retrieving a sealed envelope and offering it forward to the group. If they were to take it and investigate it's contents, they'd find various travel tickets - bus, train and plane. Mostly for locations faaar away from this city.
Well that was... interesting.

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Post by Spekkal on Thu Feb 25, 2016 8:50 pm

The gorgon woman scrambled for the packet, snatching it cleanly out of the air. With a pull of her tongue, she straightened her back and slithered away from the scene before the other two had much of a word on the matter. She was planning on bailing anyway, and that was the perfect damned excuse. Needless to say, her 'companions' were not so pleased. The griffon took one step forward towards her... only to be yanked back by his jacket by the buff woman.

"Shiiiii' we's goin' on holiday!" the porcupine hollered, raising the envelope that she had obtained from the unusual man, "Look at this, Skiye! We can go gun' get fucked up!" She released her grin on the other. The hybrid frowned with a definitive glare of distrust towards both the tickets and the departing figure of unknown origin. Suspicious. He'd love to ignore it as he intended, but it just left a semi-sickly feeling of unease bubbling in his stomach.
"Suppose so," he replied, "Suppooooose so."

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Post by Dregan on Fri Feb 26, 2016 6:18 pm

The figure slowly disappeared from the group, walking further and further away until he was fully swallowed by mists. Biggest building, top floor... The thought went on repeat, echoing in his mind, trailing off only to be grasped again and pulled into the forefront. Cemented into his thoughts.
To one side of him, the mists seemed to gain colour for a second, swirling together until they formed the semblance of a rat, keeping pace as she strutted along with that walking stick. Wherever she'd gone before, she was now fully present once more.
"You handled that calmly," she stated. There was no emotion there... no sign that she approved or disapproved of his approach. More.. an observation of sorts.
"Because I do not think any of them loyal," he stated calmly, "At least, not in the traditional sense of the word. I suspect noone in this place truly is. More a case that if they do as they're expected to, they may see it through to the next day."
"Hm..." there was a slight pause as the rat's stick continued to tack along the ground, "I thought in this place you were inherently free to do as you please. No crime too large."
"Freedom under the thumb. Only rules'd be unwritten ones. The kind that don't exist, but everyone knows they're there," the furless creature left that open for response, but none really came from the rat. Instead, they just walked in the quiet - preparing to come upon the sight of the large building they sought.

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