Can my bio be improved?

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Can my bio be improved?

Post by Galaxy The Wolf on Fri Nov 27, 2015 4:38 am

Here it is:http://sonicrpnation.forumotion.com/t3556-jetflys-bio
Do you recommend I fix anything?

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My FanFiction of Akuma: http://figment.com/books/1015225-The-Story-Of-Akuma

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Re: Can my bio be improved?

Post by SparkleSwirl on Sun Jan 31, 2016 10:37 pm

Well, I think I caught a spelling error~
"Mussle" I'm guessing is either "Muscle" or " Muzzle" 

And switching things dying when they're scratched in the dark mode to 
It seriously injuring them, or making them ill may be a bit easier to handle in an RP, while still making sense and maintaining that deadly/dangerous aura to it!~
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